Sunday, June 18, 2017

Deep seeded or deep-seated?

Common Writing Mistakes - Part One

The English language is a harsh mistress. With its words of many origins and ever-evolving nature, it's no wonder even the most ardent word nerd can get confused.

As writers, we all make mistakes. It’s part of the learning process. This post is to highlight some of the errors yours truly has made, in hopes that others may avoid those same pitfalls. I’ll add to this post as circumstances, and my own growth as a writer, dictate.

Deep Seated versus Deep Seeded
Here’s a boo boo I’ve definitely made. You might think seeded would be the way to go. It evokes a sense of things sunken, embedded. Yet seated is the correct option. Deep-seated refers to something fixed in place, hence a “deep-seated rivalry” is correct. Have a seat, rather than plant a seed.

Bated versus Baited
While I know the answer to this one, I have seen this error so many times it’s worth bringing up. Baited means to lure someone or something. You bait a hook, you might bait someone into an argument. Bated is the opposite of abate, which means to diminish. To await something with bated breath means you are anxious, on the edge of your seat. Baited breath? Only is you ate a clove of raw garlic and want to lure your lover in for a stinky smooch as a practical joke.

Any other common misconceptions? Share them in the comments.

Thursday, March 23, 2017

Sensitivity in Writing - Yay or Nay?

It all started innocently enough. I offered those familiar words of encouragement to a fellow writer: write what you know. Then came the storm. I was suddenly awash in a wave of angry tweets from other writers who had no qualms about pointing out how wrong I was. What happened?

Unbeknownst to me, I had stepped into the middle of an active thread on Twitter, a very angry one. I had seen a lone tweet from a writer I admired, commented on it, and moved on, unaware of what was really going on. The core of the discussion was this: the writer in question (the author of a very well-known novel about a close-knit band of young men from the wrong side of the tracks) had been asked why none of the characters she created were gay. Her argument was that she based her characters on people she knew in real life as well the real life setting of her youth. Not a lot of openly "out" young men in 1960's Oklahoma, I guess.

The gist of the discussion was how writers needed to grow diversity in their writing, to include characters of all colors, races, religions, and sexualities. I certainly have no argument with that but I personally don't feel that I can write from these perspectives because, in my eyes, I would be doing these communities a disservice by writing from outside my own perspective. I could certainly research and talk to people in the real world in order to gain a broader point of view, but would that be enough? A story on NPR while I was on my way to work addressed just this dilemma: the growing role of the sensitivity reader.

A sensitivity reader is like a beta reader but with a special mission in mind: to look for instances of racial or social negativity, however unintentional, in a piece of writing. For example, a woman wrote a novel about a young black man in college. Drawing from her own experience on college campuses, she wrote her character to be very similar to the white frat boy types she had known during her own years at university. Two women of color who acted as her sensitivity readers were quick to point out that no, no, no - black fraternities were vastly different from the whitewashed world she had portrayed in her novel.

The writer meant no harm, she simply didn't have the personal experience to know any better. By using these beta readers, she was able to learn how to craft her character and his world in a way that made sense to, and was true to, the black community. Pop the term "sensitivity reader" into a search engine and loads of articles, as well as readers for hire, will pop up. Arguments are already being made both for and against this practice. The goal of this type of beta reading is to help the writer avoid unintentionally offending or alienating readers.

Yes, yes, some may say "that's politically correct bullshit!" I prefer to think of it as reflecting the world as it really is, in all it's rainbow colored glory, rather than advancing stereotypes by writing from what you assume rather than from reality. It's less about "don't offend anyone!" and more "write what's real."

That being said, it's important to remain true to the setting of your novel. If you're writing about the antebellum American South, there's going to be certain degree of racism and slang that was considered "normal" back then. How members of the gay community lived in 1950 is a far cry from how they lived in 2000. Write what's real based on the world you are creating, however unpleasant or potentially offensive. Mark Twain certainly would.

Check out these links for more info on the growing role of sensitivity readers in today's publishing market.

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Sunday, February 26, 2017

Here we go again

I had let my domain name go for a while but, on the advice of some industry pros, have reclaimed it. I've been ghostwriting blog posts for a few online retailers for a while, something that gives me the opportunity to learn about new thing as well as earn some cash writing. I have one completed manuscript in the can, ready for some serious editing, and another in progress.

It's been slow going on the second one. I've tried to motivate myself by telling myself I only have to write a little bit a day; small bites at the whole pie will finish it off. But it is hard for me to write when my head's not in the right space so it's been a real struggle. I'll have to double my word count goals for the month of March in order to catch up. Can I do it? We shall see.

Thanks for watching!

Tuesday, September 1, 2015

The latest words from the wordsmith

Well... calling myself a wordsmith seems a bit lofty. But writing has commenced so I'll let it slide.

I found the path through my newest novel and was able to flesh out a plot that made sense. Talking through a couple of roadblocks with another person helped me knock them down and get past the trouble spots. I even have the ending written already (I know, I know, jumping ahead again!) and it's a good conclusion that leaves the story both complete and open ended for the reader to imagine more beyond that last page.

Feeling good.


Tuesday, July 28, 2015

She's back!

Woot woot! I heard a knock at the door and flung it open wide. Inspiration was there! "Did ya miss me," she said. Did I ever. It's so good to see an old friend. Now we're getting to work, tackling this beast of a story and wrestling it into shape. It'll be grand.

Saturday, July 25, 2015

Back in the Saddle

Well, here we are. A quick review. This is the new home of the website. Welcome. What's been going on with the writer? Good stuff, actually. In case you missed it, I had a short story published in a literary magazine! That was tremendously exciting. Also, another milestone, I finished my first novel manuscript. That was the first time I've gotten all the way from once upon a time to and they lived happily ever after. You know what that means, right? Time to start the second novel.


And therein lies the problem. I am not sure which direction to go with the second story. Usually I know how the story starts, and I know how the story ends. Not this time. I have a general idea but can't get it off the launch pad. I can't even outline. I think the problem is I can't decide to stick with my chosen genre (see blog post from March 2011, "Naughty Bits") or to go more in a traditional romance direction. But, ya know what? I need to stick to the plan! I made this decision four years ago, for crying out loud, why am I putting myself through this again?



So. With that in mind, I need to decide who my heroine and hero are. One of the will be human, the other not. Now I need to decide which one needs to be saved, and which one is savior. And the everything else that happens after that. The only thing to do is get on that writing horse and ride. Yeehaw!

Saturday, September 10, 2011

Judgement Call

Just being in the laundromat evokes a sense of poverty or misfortune; a feeling of transience. They are not fancy, shiny places. They are strictly about function sans form. The attendant is a cheerful older man who is busy repairing one of the aging machines and chatting with customers, while the patrons generally keep to themselves, avoiding eye contact and conversation with anyone other than the old man.

He came in just behind me. Just a guy, a bit older than myself, but I found myself making up a whole life story for him. Newly divorced (no wedding ring; kept asking the attendant how to work the machine and how much detergent to use). He tries to keep healthy (we both went next door to Subway where he ordered a flatbread sandwich and water). He has some money (iPhone) and is social (either surfed or talked on the iPhone the whole time in Subway). The wardrobe threw me a bit: almost exclusively black shirts, all hung neatly upon exiting the dryer. Gay? Bartender? New Yorker?

Moreover, I thought what would an observer think of me? What might I say to the passing stranger? No wedding ring (it was left behind on the bathroom counter), no makeup, hair in a ponytail. That blue tee shirt I wear to do housework. Worn out hausfrau? Single mom? I ordered a chicken/bacon/ranch and a Coke at Subway. Does that tell people I don't care about my health? Read a book. Am I an intellectual or one of those people who reads 18 Harlequin Romances a week? (I know I'm neither) I would be interested to know what vibe I give off but, of course, how would one ever answer that question? You can't ask your friends - their perceptions are skewed. You can't ask the stranger - they'll think you're a whack job. Or they might be one. How do you know what people think of you and, more importantly, do you care?